My first poem in english
Today in news I found the this sentence is quite romantic,"the silence after Strom".
Then I tried this poetry. Let me know your comments.
The silence after Storm
While trains moving rapidly
I was standing flanked by them
The sun wavers to saw the world
The train Windows was sparkling
I know you were there
Innocently you stared me
Intently I grabbed that
The moment you gaze on me
That Gaze started killing me
Lost my heart at flash
The Flash becomes flames
The flames Spread over mind
The mind vanished
Without seeing you hours
Mind stormed
I beg you, throw me another
look to find my silence.
Then I tried this poetry. Let me know your comments.
The silence after Storm
While trains moving rapidly
I was standing flanked by them
The sun wavers to saw the world
The train Windows was sparkling
I know you were there
Innocently you stared me
Intently I grabbed that
The moment you gaze on me
That Gaze started killing me
Lost my heart at flash
The Flash becomes flames
The flames Spread over mind
The mind vanished
Without seeing you hours
Mind stormed
I beg you, throw me another
look to find my silence.

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